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Dark void (Cinquain) by Prince of Void

Dark void Find the lost love Ocean and a dying fish Being the Breathless in dark void’s heart abyss

Prince of Void 9-Jul-07/4:48 AM
living is the selfish act
death opens no door
the poor and the rich
they are not the same
our secerts last in the silnce
our lies will kill us soon
what we have done
it was to dig a tunnel
but at the end there is no light
and life goes on
however we figure out or not
do u think i care ?
do u think somebody will notice that ?
no one notice that




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