Re: a comment on Dark void by Prince of Void |
8-Jul-07/9:19 AM |
yes there is a lost love in a dark void
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Re: Win, Win, Lose, Lose by Dovina |
29-Jun-07/7:42 AM |
win,win
we die in this victory
what we lost in this misery
the happiness we lose or win
only lose,lose
we fall in this failure
that we could understand better
some lose ,some win
so what's american dream ?
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Re: a comment on ........ by Prince of Void |
16-Jun-07/11:38 AM |
well did u watch the movie called " lost highway "
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Re: a comment on ........ by Prince of Void |
16-Jun-07/11:11 AM |
I'm just lost - by the empty spaces and afterwards the void is between us
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Re: a comment on ........ by Prince of Void |
15-Jun-07/10:47 AM |
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Re: The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina |
14-Jun-07/1:03 PM |
I stands alone on the unsaid of misery
where both worlds lost
where ..............
oh sigh
here in my eyes
what has not been found
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Re: leaves of clover by lmp |
14-Jun-07/12:49 PM |
thx for ur comments on my poems
ur poems lies in the bed of subconsciousness
so this green fields of ur dreams have drowned emotions
and waken up the soul to find the mirror of the existence
it really helps me if u add comments on my poems
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Re: the play is a tragedy of dreams by Prince of Void |
14-Jun-07/12:42 PM |
the void filled my empty space's commet
do i really deserve such zero in this zero effected life ...i dont deserve it ...
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Re: a comment on The Editor by Dovina |
7-May-07/2:05 PM |
your poems,your scars concealed
The transience of life.....
Wasted moments won't return
my final tears are to come
the dream has just begun
Ever with me
Beyond my dreams
beyond your tone
beyond unexplained pains
here in my soul
I passed them by
in the transience of life.....
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Re: Altitude by half.italian |
1-May-07/1:59 PM |
Poems are made by us
One of us shall see
What we paint
Upon the blank page
That depicts what shall be unseen
In the heart of meanings
When the heart is pathless
When no poem shall go uncommented
Where poems and oceans cross each other
In the horizon of poets' dreams
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Re: a comment on requiem for the dead generation by Prince of Void |
1-May-07/1:58 PM |
Poems are made by us
One of us shall see
What we paint
Upon the blank page
That depicts what shall be unseen
In the heart of meanings
When the heart is pathless
When no poem shall go uncommented
Where poems and oceans cross each other
In the horizon of poets' dreams
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Re: a comment on requiem for the dead generation by Prince of Void |
1-May-07/1:46 PM |
Here is a empty grave that I want to lie in
The void where I want to fill by my own body
Oh pains how can you leave me now?
Remember all words I wrote about you
I need you â¦
How could you ignore me?
When I need you
Donât leave me now
Donât run away
You are the Life
Thatâs running away from me
Look how Iâm dying
And getting numb
And how I can explain such death
How can it treat me in that way?
Donât leave me now
Know how I need you
Itâs too late for me
Iâm dead by now
ohhhhhhhhhhh Dovina
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Re: 1982 County Stadium by jessicazee |
27-Apr-07/5:21 AM |
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Re: you've returned i'm glad by richa |
9-Apr-07/9:54 AM |
The poemâs been written by you
It is full of happiness in the sweet misery of past but the melody of music altered your life
As your life lingers on but you are still wondering about the season that enchanted you for years
Years had faced you harsh and now itâs time to let it go and think that the reasons of those happenings
Will be lost in the moment that you found something invaluable that he or she never understand...So if they fall...Nothing happen you no longer need his or her distraction.
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Re: We⦠by Prince of Void |
8-Apr-07/11:01 AM |
I found myself alone in skies
Where the insanity blinds eyes
When I am a king of misjudgments
There is nowhere to hide my jealousy
Iâm drowning in doubts of âwhysâ
As Iâm lost within frustrations
Iâm dying from this agony
To stage of the powerful play
The playâs a tragedy of dreams
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Re: a comment on it's the different kind of a poem by Prince of Void |
4-Apr-07/9:58 AM |
it's aesthetic appeal and a complicated structure arising from a simple definition.
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Re: Monsters by MacFrantic |
3-Apr-07/9:34 AM |
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Re: Monsters by MacFrantic |
3-Apr-07/9:31 AM |
monsters ..it's a good choice of title
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Re: it's the different kind of a poem by Prince of Void |
2-Apr-07/10:17 AM |
portray
happiness
words
allegory
worlds
a new dawn
our minds
oceans
inside
emptiness and nothingness
all memories
behind
the breeze
a brave new world
dot.cybernetic wasteland
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Re: it's the different kind of a poem by Prince of Void |
31-Mar-07/11:31 AM |
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