Re: a comment on This life is sheer nonsense by Prince of Void	29-Mar-07/10:51 AM
Let’s portray happiness in words Let’s shape the different deeper kind of the allegory As we’re chasing a new dawn down there Upon the shore of our minds That mind holds those oceans inside Those are washing over emptiness and nothingness We left all memories behind Now we’re facing by the breeze From the ocean of a brave new world
Re: a comment on This life is sheer nonsense by Prince of Void	22-Mar-07/3:23 PM
sure...."The GOD'S laughing at us' quoted by unknown .....maybe i have gone too far maybe i shoud know more ..i never judge i'm keeping going maybe next stop ..i will meet someone ..my life truned in sthelse ..well at the end no one notices that who cars why we die and live for ...this is the requime for my dreams
Re: a comment on This life is sheer nonsense by Prince of Void	22-Mar-07/3:12 PM
maybe another life u will end up in such condition of what i have ..and suffer the same pain and agony then u will say such things for urself ..this is the hardship u dont have ..i'm dealing with it ...i'm trying to enjoy rather than hating things ..but i want to write the depth of this agony more artistic or portray them in words
Re: a comment on This life is sheer nonsense by Prince of Void	22-Mar-07/2:47 PM
abandon all seneless gloom when ? where ? in middle of hell life is a hell for me ............hades
Re: a comment on Out of this crowd a mistress or a friend by Prince of Void	6-Mar-07/11:33 AM
Cunt I'm happy to see u again may I call u the taste of heaven or the bitterness of man's weakness I can smell you,cunt you are all around here in this cybernetic wasteland I know in your life You have had many visitors from ur experiences that you have visited by strangers and friends these are nonesense as regards your cunt
Re: a comment on The ceremony of death by Prince of Void	5-Mar-07/2:24 AM
A good poem With unanimous votes Can’t alter the fate of innocent people They have killed so far We always look for votes Rather than writing a poem About people have never found peace in their lives... What’s our role as a poet? To reveal deep thoughts and feelings They represent our aesthetic point of views For every aspect of human lives Or we trying to show dreams of better tomorrow The road not taken Both roads are the same But I always love to take the one I know it’s the same as the other one So that’s good poem or bad poem makes difference Who cares? Who wants to be top of list? I’m still trying to find my role As you commented it’s not a good poem I entirely agree with u Please tell me all weakness of this poem
Re: looking for by Phalkon	25-Feb-07/9:51 AM
before my pen pin down what's in my head I had stared at darkness it holds all paths for the peace it carry me away from the cybernetic world to the timeless place as i'm looking for the point on the pointless ocean i could be placeless evermore
Re: Firestorm by Dovina	25-Feb-07/8:16 AM
I’m far away from the claws of the dark city I’m heading to the firestorm And the summer wind tries to creep beside me I’m going slowly against the sitting sun My eyes will be the flame of a candle The Candle burn at both ends I’m pursuing the best ends By my beginning knows my end However I’m crossing the horizons of Mysterious silence It’s more like outlook of my life
Re: a comment on her love fading in the haze by Prince of Void	25-Feb-07/4:47 AM
you shoud not judge ..... becuase ur happiness is ur penis that's what u never understand what my lines are the lines crossed the myserty of what's inside universal mind of what's in seven skies Of what's in Caesar's hand, and Plato's brain, Of what's Lord Christ's heart, and Shakspeare's strain.
Re: The exile returns by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	25-Feb-07/4:36 AM
ur poems are adventures in the world of shit all condoms that you used in this wasteland it's no more uselful like ur cyber-shit that make u think that u are the most talented so slowly open your eyes to the entwined world that contains no more shit
Re: Bitter by Ranger	31-Jan-07/8:36 AM
all the ghosts... all the ghosts... made my vote your mind is happy butI'm telling you you should learn to let it go
Re: a comment on It was a dream within a dream by Prince of Void	25-Jan-07/1:33 AM
if there is a secert im not aware of that i myself is inside mysteries
Re: a comment on If she thinks if she believes by Prince of Void	18-Jan-07/10:02 AM
thank u for helping me ....
Re: Fury by wilco	15-Jan-07/7:26 AM
Good job ..it's a great poem
Re: a comment on Happy birthday to myself by Prince of Void	7-Jan-07/7:56 AM
thanks
Re: Fanatic by Dovina	31-Dec-06/9:04 AM
he shoud know he's running out of time open up, surrender to the plot when a cold wind blew on this day we looked the other way tomorrow we might find the answers lay in riverbeds and dust we believed sth beyond the beauty and order our great city of vision lost in this beautiful choas
Re: Cloche. by howl	31-Dec-06/8:48 AM
keep going on ..it's very cinematic
Re: a comment on "incomplete" by Prince of Void	31-Dec-06/8:46 AM
the depth of sadness and void means nothing when you leave them behind ...you are right
Re: a comment on The blankness of his life by Nicholas Jones	27-Dec-06/9:49 AM
you are right that point that happiness is transient
Re: Homeless by Dovina	16-Dec-06/9:36 AM
That was great ...soon i will share one of my experiences... I had faced a homeless better to say he was placeless in this world. They live where this world lost so long... So late-meeting but I'm feeling in this way... Their actions ask how do whys become void? The void makes them homeless in the hopeless shape... the shapes of their hearts make all differences