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It was a dream within a dream (Other) by Prince of Void
I looked out the window Sometimes to seek the color of the shadows But when I got ready to paint Just closed my eyes All that I could see or seem It was a dream within a dream I dared to be wrong Dreaming permits each and every one of us To look at the hidden occurrences in our soul Like a telescope through galaxies From that way my soul is writing about myself Dreams behind dreams Dreams pass into the reality of action From the action stems the dream again Dreams say what my worlds mean My dreams to interpret my life In forming a bridge between body and mind The path is to the deepest peace of mind So I seized upon the long winter’s evening Let myself to the beauty of my dreams That I descended the tower of the soul Its endless thorough dreams from The heart of the subconscious

Down the ladder: Round and Round

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9758
Posted: January 23, 2007 10:33 AM PST; Last modified: January 23, 2007 10:33 AM PST
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[6] Dovina @ 75.82.85.162 | 23-Jan-07/7:17 PM | Reply
Am I dreaming or did you crash the wall, slither through the defenses, and post this twice, just nine minutes apart? Please tell me your secret.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 213.207.253.39 > Dovina | 25-Jan-07/1:33 AM | Reply
if there is a secert
im not aware of that
i myself is inside mysteries
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