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Happy birthday to myself

Member since 2002 · Posted 31 Dec 2006 · 3 comments

Saturday was yesterday of my birthday Good news day turned in my birthday Yes Today is my birthday Oh 25 years passed by Murmuring to myself ...There is still time to go Birthday party is ended by Deserted by The people have gone At close of day to burn the old age Tonight is my birthdayâs night In empty bed no wish lies Expect lots of dreams hasnât come to my head Iâm right riding to it When the darkness drops again The dreams of better tomorrows fill the void Bring the peace of mind to the exhausted head They will held me hopefuls even Iâm dead But Soon I will leave tomorrows behind From the transience of my birthdays to my death

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[8] Dovina 1-Jan-07/12:16 PM Reply

So many grammar glitches here, I have to wonder if the few correct phrases are mistakes in a dialect of hopelessness.

[n/a] Ranger 2-Jan-07/1:17 AM Reply

Happy birthday indeed

[n/a] Prince of Void › Ranger 7-Jan-07/7:56 AM Reply

thanks