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Happy birthday to myself (Other) by Prince of Void

Saturday was yesterday of my birthday Good news day turned in my birthday Yes Today is my birthday Oh 25 years passed by Murmuring to myself ...There is still time to go Birthday party is ended by Deserted by The people have gone At close of day to burn the old age Tonight is my birthday’s night In empty bed no wish lies Expect lots of dreams hasn’t come to my head I’m right riding to it When the darkness drops again The dreams of better tomorrows fill the void Bring the peace of mind to the exhausted head They will held me hopefuls even I’m dead But Soon I will leave tomorrows behind From the transience of my birthdays to my death

Dovina 1-Jan-07/12:16 PM
So many grammar glitches here, I have to wonder if the few correct phrases are mistakes in a dialect of hopelessness.




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