| Re: Advent by Nicholas Jones |
16-Dec-06/9:17 AM |
I was sleeping and being comforted
By a cool breeze, when suddenly a grey dove
From a thicket sang and sobbed with longing
And reminded me of my own passion
I had been away from my own soul so long
So late-sleeping .but thatâs doveâs crying
Woke me and made me cry, praise
To all early-walking believer
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| Re: a comment on Bitter by Ranger |
13-Dec-06/9:33 AM |
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I agreed that there is no plot in this poetry ..but it doesnt make no difference I like it as he had tried to show
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| Re: OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer |
13-Dec-06/9:30 AM |
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it's really a good example for new structure poetry
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| Re: a comment on From pains inside by Prince of Void |
12-Dec-06/8:32 AM |
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I'd like to reciprocate ...whenever I try to comment I'm too exhausted due to working lots ..I have lots of poems i havent posted to this site ...but i will try to comment enough for being free from my selfishness ......
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| Re: a comment on From pains inside by Prince of Void |
12-Dec-06/8:26 AM |
that's side of my void..............
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| Re: Goldmunds Slut Fiasco v.2 [Revised] by Y2kSlamPoet |
27-Nov-06/10:37 AM |
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it's good ..and keep going on this way ..don't trun it into other ways
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| Re: a comment on Though I m lost, Love is not by Prince of Void |
21-Nov-06/4:25 AM |
Prince of Void
because I have agonies in my life ...and I just want to scream like the famous painting called scream ..my art is to describe the agonies of life into the soul of words until I feel it's time to put the pain away ...
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| Re: a comment on Iâm unsaid and dead by Prince of Void |
11-Mar-06/10:41 AM |
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that's true...it must go on
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| Re: a comment on Temporary moments by Prince of Void |
5-Feb-06/6:59 AM |
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u are right .. a good choice ..thanx
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| Re: May I Help by Dovina |
23-Jan-06/10:18 AM |
I love how you drew me thorogh the joy of poetry
that's beauty goes to my heart..and I contact ur feelings are restless thorough ur poems
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| Re: a comment on Do 20 always make this poem sense? by Prince of Void |
15-Jan-06/11:15 PM |
can u tell me what's the right grammar ,?
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| Re: Do 20 always make this poem sense? by Prince of Void |
15-Jan-06/7:39 AM |
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| Re: a comment on [] by Prince of Void |
9-Jan-06/3:53 PM |
sorry ..do u know anything about post-modernism ..and these reflections from modern poetry ..in post-modernism they called representation and Intertextuality
...when u can't read this ..how u came to judge about the art that has gone beyond ur knowledge ..it's useless to talke to u like that ..and i want you to know ..thanx anyway for ur comment
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| Re: The Fragile silhouette of me by Prince of Void |
7-Jan-06/12:43 AM |
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| Re: a comment on when i met sky alone by Prince of Void |
4-Jan-06/6:12 AM |
thanx for ur comment ..soon i will tell everyone why i have this style
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| Re: a comment on when i met sky alone by Prince of Void |
4-Jan-06/6:11 AM |
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You are right..i think this is a very good p.o.v to this poem ..i like this comment...soon i will tell everyone why i have this style ..
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| Re: Claim to Call by MacFrantic |
2-Jan-06/12:37 PM |
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silence of memories haunted ur poem ...nice job
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| Re: ghost host by elderking |
31-Dec-05/10:58 AM |
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ur poem has haunted my mind like a ghost ..good job
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| Re: a comment on when i met sky alone by Prince of Void |
31-Dec-05/10:46 AM |
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u are right ....thanx for ur comment ...can i ask ur ? what makes u interested in the first line
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| Re: I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil |
30-Dec-05/3:45 AM |
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u are right ...we dont need to follow rules of past ..we made rules ..that's art ...it must face changes if changes are against past ..
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