on OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer
13 Dec 2006, 9:30 AM
it's really a good example for new structure poetry
replying on From pains inside by Prince of Void
12 Dec 2006, 8:32 AM
I'd like to reciprocate ...whenever I try to comment I'm too exhausted due to working lots ..I have lots of poems i havent posted to this site ...but i will try to comment enough for being free from my selfishness ......
replying on From pains inside by Prince of Void
12 Dec 2006, 8:26 AM
that's side of my void..............
on Goldmunds Slut Fiasco v.2 [Revised] by Y2kSlamPoet
27 Nov 2006, 10:37 AM
it's good ..and keep going on this way ..don't trun it into other ways
replying on Though I m lost, Love is not by Prince of Void
21 Nov 2006, 4:25 AM
Prince of Void
because I have agonies in my life ...and I just want to scream like the famous painting called scream ..my art is to describe the agonies of life into the soul of words until I feel it's time to put the pain away ...
because I have agonies in my life ...and I just want to scream like the famous painting called scream ..my art is to describe the agonies of life into the soul of words until I feel it's time to put the pain away ...
replying on Iâm unsaid and dead by Prince of Void
11 Mar 2006, 10:41 AM
that's true...it must go on
replying on Temporary moments by Prince of Void
5 Feb 2006, 6:59 AM
u are right .. a good choice ..thanx
on May I Help by Dovina
23 Jan 2006, 10:18 AM
I love how you drew me thorogh the joy of poetry
that's beauty goes to my heart..and I contact ur feelings are restless thorough ur poems
that's beauty goes to my heart..and I contact ur feelings are restless thorough ur poems
replying on Do 20 always make this poem sense? by Prince of Void
15 Jan 2006, 11:15 PM
can u tell me what's the right grammar ,?
on Do 20 always make this poem sense? by Prince of Void
15 Jan 2006, 7:39 AM
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replying on [] by Prince of Void
9 Jan 2006, 3:53 PM
sorry ..do u know anything about post-modernism ..and these reflections from modern poetry ..in post-modernism they called representation and Intertextuality
...when u can't read this ..how u came to judge about the art that has gone beyond ur knowledge ..it's useless to talke to u like that ..and i want you to know ..thanx anyway for ur comment
...when u can't read this ..how u came to judge about the art that has gone beyond ur knowledge ..it's useless to talke to u like that ..and i want you to know ..thanx anyway for ur comment
on The Fragile silhouette of me by Prince of Void
7 Jan 2006, 12:43 AM
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replying on when i met sky alone by Prince of Void
4 Jan 2006, 6:12 AM
thanx for ur comment ..soon i will tell everyone why i have this style
replying on when i met sky alone by Prince of Void
4 Jan 2006, 6:11 AM
You are right..i think this is a very good p.o.v to this poem ..i like this comment...soon i will tell everyone why i have this style ..
on Claim to Call by MacFrantic
2 Jan 2006, 12:37 PM
silence of memories haunted ur poem ...nice job
on ghost host by elderking
31 Dec 2005, 10:58 AM
ur poem has haunted my mind like a ghost ..good job
replying on when i met sky alone by Prince of Void
31 Dec 2005, 10:46 AM
u are right ....thanx for ur comment ...can i ask ur ? what makes u interested in the first line
on I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil
30 Dec 2005, 3:45 AM
u are right ...we dont need to follow rules of past ..we made rules ..that's art ...it must face changes if changes are against past ..
By a cool breeze, when suddenly a grey dove
From a thicket sang and sobbed with longing
And reminded me of my own passion
I had been away from my own soul so long
So late-sleeping .but thatâs doveâs crying
Woke me and made me cry, praise
To all early-walking believer