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Temporary moments
Deep inside the grieves of moments
On early morning light of dawn
Breaking upon the waves of sea
Deep within dream of me
The path that led to show
What time can bring
A serious misconception of time
That led to ruin
Thatâs emptiest of moments flow over past
Rising and falling dying down within me
All this time all I had inside was what I couldn't see
All this time all what I want to say
Was something beyond my senses?
All this time all what I grieve
Was to know why you are gone
All this time who l love was you
Still you â¦
All this time what I have done...
Was to make you come back again
Waiting endlessly thorough million tears has fallen on
This ocean of time it can be something
to see me now
6 comments
Use a double line space instead of "..." after "Still you"
Lose the "..." after "All this time what I have done".
Either "through millions of tears fallen on
This ocean of time. It can be something
to see me now" or-
"though a million tears has fallen on
This ocean of time, it can be something
to see me now"
You are definately improving though.
Deep inside the grieves of moments
On early morning light of dawn
Breaking upon the waves of sea
Deep within the dream of me
The path that led to show
What time can sometimes bring
That led to ruin and
Empty moments flowing over past
Rising, falling dying in me
All this time I had what I couldn't see
Beyond my senses, what I grieve
Was to know why you are gone
All l loved was you
Still you â¦
All this time what I have done...
Was to draw you back again
Waiting thorough a million tears
This ocean of time can be something
If only to see me now
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