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Temporary moments (Other) by Prince of Void

Deep inside the grieves of moments On early morning light of dawn Breaking upon the waves of sea Deep within dream of me The path that led to show What time can bring A serious misconception of time That led to ruin That’s emptiest of moments flow over past Rising and falling dying down within me All this time all I had inside was what I couldn't see All this time all what I want to say Was something beyond my senses? All this time all what I grieve Was to know why you are gone All this time who l love was you Still you … All this time what I have done... Was to make you come back again Waiting endlessly thorough million tears has fallen on This ocean of time it can be something to see me now

AngelicVampiress 22-Jan-06/11:11 AM
a bit repeative but still a very moving and beautiful poem. My favorite part is "waiting endlessly thorough million tears has fallen on this ocean of time it can be something to see me now" I give it an *8*




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