Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Though I m lost, Love is not (Other) by Prince of Void
Though I m lost, Love is not In The hour of death Moments're grieving inside the silence of ocean Memories're waving restlessly down into my illusion They’ll be carried away by my tears Tears can’t bring her back Though nothing can bring back The hour of love That remains behind In the agonies that last through eternity

Up the ladder: Teddy Bear
Down the ladder: Who king in selfish selves

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 01
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 01
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7776
Posted: November 16, 2006 8:44 AM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2006 8:44 AM PST
View voting details
Comments:
[7] Dovina @ 200.76.226.9 | 19-Nov-06/2:11 PM | Reply
Illusions are not so bad, even beat reality much of the time. Why imagine agonies?
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 213.207.253.125 > Dovina | 21-Nov-06/4:25 AM | Reply
Prince of Void
because I have agonies in my life ...and I just want to scream like the famous painting called scream ..my art is to describe the agonies of life into the soul of words until I feel it's time to put the pain away ...
172 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001