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From pains inside

by Prince of Void

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Dec 2006 · 4 comments

I had enough … From pains inside to Emptiness on the other side I have lost someone again I have to imagine nothing matters again I have to think that I am not alone I should ignore that life has committed a crime again I have to face this void what the others die for I should know if I could do this or not I have to understand may I lose all chances That’s not good enough

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4 comments

[n/a] Ranger 10-Dec-06/10:40 AM Reply
I don't know what to say
[n/a] Prince of Void › Ranger 12-Dec-06/8:26 AM Reply
that's side of my void..............
[7] Dovina 10-Dec-06/5:06 PM Reply
Well, I will say that you do not comment enough. If you want to keep posting these true-to-your-name "void" poems, then go ahead. But when you post without commenting on the other poems, I have to think you are selfish, that you want only to receive, with no inclination to reciprocate. That is truly void.
[n/a] Prince of Void › Dovina 12-Dec-06/8:32 AM Reply
I'd like to reciprocate ...whenever I try to comment I'm too exhausted due to working lots ..I have lots of poems i havent posted to this site ...but i will try to comment enough for being free from my selfishness ......