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From pains inside (Other) by Prince of Void I had enough â¦
From pains inside to
Emptiness on the other side
I have lost someone again
I have to imagine nothing matters again
I have to think that I am not alone
I should ignore that life has committed a crime again
I have to face this void what the others die for
I should know if I could do this or not
I have to understand may I lose all chances
Thatâs not good enough
Up the ladder:
Owl Eyes
Down the ladder:
This Song
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Posted: December 10, 2006 10:27 AM PST; Last modified: December 10, 2006 10:27 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9226 Comments:
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Ranger @ 62.252.32.15
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10-Dec-06/10:40 AM
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I don't know what to say
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Prince of Void @ 213.207.253.93
> Ranger
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12-Dec-06/8:26 AM
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that's side of my void..............
Well, I will say that you do not comment enough. If you want to keep posting these true-to-your-name "void" poems, then go ahead. But when you post without commenting on the other poems, I have to think you are selfish, that you want only to receive, with no inclination to reciprocate. That is truly void.
I'd like to reciprocate ...whenever I try to comment I'm too exhausted due to working lots ..I have lots of poems i havent posted to this site ...but i will try to comment enough for being free from my selfishness ......
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