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From pains inside (Other) by Prince of Void

I had enough … From pains inside to Emptiness on the other side I have lost someone again I have to imagine nothing matters again I have to think that I am not alone I should ignore that life has committed a crime again I have to face this void what the others die for I should know if I could do this or not I have to understand may I lose all chances That’s not good enough

Dovina 10-Dec-06/5:06 PM
Well, I will say that you do not comment enough. If you want to keep posting these true-to-your-name "void" poems, then go ahead. But when you post without commenting on the other poems, I have to think you are selfish, that you want only to receive, with no inclination to reciprocate. That is truly void.




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