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The Fragile silhouette of me (Other) by Prince of Void [music]
I saw also that there was an ocean of darkness and death
but an infinite ocean of light and love
which flowed over the ocean of darkness ...
..As i said that I laid down...
Down to my tears and fears
now they are like an infinite ocean of agony
which flows over and over again
Iâm just staring at light.
Itâs getting darker and darker
finally the void is all me
it doesnât end in light and love
they were words wasted away
[silence]
as I passed away into the void
[void]
Up the ladder:
Deluge
Down the ladder:
Prayer
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Posted: January 5, 2006 12:21 PM PST; Last modified: January 5, 2006 12:27 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.089402 Overall Rank: 6315 Comments:
i think this is written quite beautifully. it just flows from line to line almost taking you into the void. super!
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I suppose that's because you're the Prince of Void. You think your job is pretty much to say "void" in as many different ways as you can think of. It's as if the Princess of Wales just said "Wales, Wales, Wales, Wales, Wales," all the time.