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The Fragile silhouette of me (Other) by Prince of Void
[music] I saw also that there was an ocean of darkness and death but an infinite ocean of light and love which flowed over the ocean of darkness ... ..As i said that I laid down... Down to my tears and fears now they are like an infinite ocean of agony which flows over and over again I’m just staring at light. It’s getting darker and darker finally the void is all me it doesn’t end in light and love they were words wasted away [silence] as I passed away into the void [void]

Up the ladder: Indianapolis Since
Down the ladder: Cock O Croo

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6306
Posted: January 5, 2006 12:21 PM PST; Last modified: January 5, 2006 12:27 PM PST
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[n/a] Prince of Void @ 81.91.128.27 | 7-Jan-06/12:43 AM | Reply
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[6] zodiac @ 209.193.9.196 > Prince of Void | 7-Jan-06/3:36 AM | Reply
= Void.

I suppose that's because you're the Prince of Void. You think your job is pretty much to say "void" in as many different ways as you can think of. It's as if the Princess of Wales just said "Wales, Wales, Wales, Wales, Wales," all the time.
[8] pollywolly @ 62.30.170.78 | 22-Jan-06/9:12 AM | Reply
i think this is written quite beautifully. it just flows from line to line almost taking you into the void. super!
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