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"incomplete" (Other) by Prince of Void
"incomplete" Isn't "incomplete" another word for "with a void"? And Are you aware "The regrets made me voids" You're having sex before everything turn into the void Did you miss the part? Put too much into void to fill There seem to be voids everywhere Like my true-name to void Void means until we empty Every day aren't you All words are absurd" in such void Every day aren't they Since All that 'absurdity' nonsense The chilly breeze of dawn on the cold face of life And the rest is confusing.

Up the ladder: untitled 3
Down the ladder: pondering

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9259
Posted: December 27, 2006 9:45 AM PST; Last modified: December 27, 2006 9:45 AM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 208.127.72.169 | 28-Dec-06/3:04 PM | Reply
Made with a void - how sad. But how comforting when a void is filled. The shape of a void is the reverse of the thing that fits there.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 87.107.15.20 > Dovina | 31-Dec-06/8:46 AM | Reply
the depth of sadness and void means nothing when you leave them behind ...you are right
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