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In the circle of agonies⦠(Other) by Prince of Void Agony is the term for extreme pain
That may or may not last forever,
The worst of life of agony,
Which I can do best,
Agony lies here in the eyes,
Staring and raging at the dying light of a day,
One more day within slow agony,
Above the land of nothingness,
Deepening the bleakness of my shadows,
Inside the heart of darkness,
Where I want to walk into,
Is that darkness Iâm waiting for?
is there the agony there?
Thatâs the worst last here,
Am I that agony in the mirror?
Thatâs the destiny,
In the circle of agoniesâ¦
Up the ladder:
A Friend in the Night
Down the ladder:
Even Santa Takes Trimer-Spa
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Posted: June 20, 2007 11:20 AM PDT; Last modified: June 20, 2007 11:20 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9304 Comments:
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Skamper @ 202.6.129.150
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21-Jun-07/3:54 PM
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Get rid of all the punctuation - use the ends of lines as the break points and throw way those capitol letters. Agony is a fairly powerful word, but using it too often in the one write (even though it is about agony) robs it of the impact. This has almost the reclusive feel one who lives in pain constantly.
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