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This life is sheer nonsense (Other) by Prince of Void
Since I’ve reflected This life is sheer nonsense I’m always looking for something That could be somewhere I don’t know But I will get it somehow In some times That’s too late For the time of what I want That pierced the future To the bleakness of sense To the possibilities of impossibilities That I’ve been infected I'm holding inside the terminal disease That I was born with That I have to live with That can be last second I m breathing in this air In this temporary peace It seems nothing just despairs

Up the ladder: My Prayer
Down the ladder: fucked up dream

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10259
Posted: March 22, 2007 7:01 AM PDT; Last modified: March 22, 2007 7:01 AM PDT
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[6] Dovina @ 208.127.114.102 | 22-Mar-07/2:29 PM | Reply
So eat, drink and be merry for tomorrow you die. Give up all this senseless gloom.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.71.125.203 > Dovina | 22-Mar-07/2:47 PM | Reply
abandon all seneless gloom
when ?
where ?
in middle of hell
life is a hell for me ............hades
[6] Dovina @ 208.127.114.102 > Prince of Void | 22-Mar-07/3:01 PM | Reply
Then you accept fate and believe that any choice you appear to have is but illusion. And in making that decision you have chosen hades.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.71.125.203 > Dovina | 22-Mar-07/3:12 PM | Reply
maybe another life u will end up in such condition of what i have ..and suffer the same pain and agony then u will say such things for urself ..this is the hardship u dont have ..i'm dealing with it ...i'm trying to enjoy rather than hating things ..but i want to write the depth of this agony more artistic or portray them in words
[6] Dovina @ 208.127.114.102 > Prince of Void | 22-Mar-07/3:16 PM | Reply
I know a man with spina bifida. He has suffered 45 operations and has never walked. He lives in pain. He makes me laugh; he asks how my cold is coming along; he discusses philosophy and science; he seldom complains. That's his choice. Your choice is yours.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.71.125.203 > Dovina | 22-Mar-07/3:23 PM | Reply
sure...."The GOD'S laughing at us' quoted by unknown .....maybe i have gone too far maybe i shoud know more ..i never judge i'm keeping going maybe next stop ..i will meet someone ..my life truned in sthelse ..well at the end no one notices that who cars why we die and live for ...this is the requime for my dreams
[6] Dovina @ 208.127.114.102 > Prince of Void | 22-Mar-07/3:29 PM | Reply
Sadness is your choice - okay. Maybe you prefer to be sad, or maybe you think it's inevitable. Either way, there are other attitudes, and they also could your choices. It really matters little what your circumstances are.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 75.192.219.244 > Dovina | 22-Mar-07/5:03 PM | Reply
He cannot complain, for he has chosen THE WAY OF THE CRIPPLE. Many a man may be UNBELIEVABLY APPALLING, and yet be able to hide at will behind a wheelchair of innocence. God is Love. God is Kind. God is Just. Those that deserve CRIPPLEDOM, live in CRIPPLEDOM. Those that deserve better, shall be granted handsome, glistening legs, and sleek buttocks, and they shall prance about the countryside in a state of unbridled glee. I was just such a person... before The Accident.
[6] Dovina @ 208.127.114.223 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 23-Mar-07/10:30 AM | Reply
Explain the word "deserve," please, since you seemingly misuse it here.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.71.122.216 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 29-Mar-07/10:51 AM | Reply
Let’s portray happiness in words
Let’s shape the different deeper kind of the allegory
As we’re chasing a new dawn down there
Upon the shore of our minds
That mind holds those oceans inside
Those are washing over emptiness and nothingness
We left all memories behind
Now we’re facing by the breeze
From the ocean of a brave new world
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