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mass on key (Free verse) by skaskowski
she scraped at my skin and scooped paperclips into a soupbowl, down my throat through gaps in my busted teeth. somehow, somewhere this could be seen as relief for all my waiting, all my patient waiting and faking laughter as i was tickled with knifetips.

Up the ladder: Youth Spent
Down the ladder: the truth

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10249
Posted: March 27, 2005 12:08 PM PST; Last modified: March 27, 2005 12:08 PM PST
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