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I miss you still (Free verse) by beck2457
I Miss You Stillâ¦
...2,122 days 12 hours 58 minutes 183,387,540 heartbeats from
the night we
parted
I miss you still
Infinite tears
Songs, memories, places
Always present
Wanting to escape
No where to run
No where to turn
Broken hearted
Too scared to fight
Too scared to loose
I miss you still
Years gone by
Tears are distant and tears are few
I think of you
Where are you?
Howâs your life?
Wondering what memories you cherish,
Which you have chosen to forget,
I too have those, which I choose and choose not to
Remember and forget
I miss you still
Becky Betancourt
5/26/03
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10269
Posted: August 2, 2004 12:39 PM PDT; Last modified: August 2, 2004 12:39 PM PDT
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Thank you for reading it and taking the time to comment.I am a visual artist and welcome critique.