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Strings and Sinews (Free verse) by aburiedlife so i take a broken seashell
and scrape out everthing
dead and dying
from inside my chest
and end up lighter
and finally clean
but colder than i
have ever been
staying warm just as long
as i keep walking
because i came to one day
thrown clear of the wreckage
amazed that i could just walk away
Up the ladder:
Requiem for what
Down the ladder:
again it happnes
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Posted: June 22, 2004 9:37 AM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2004 9:37 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10255 Comments:
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boldsilence @ 68.11.251.86
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22-Jun-04/11:31 AM
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It's confusing. I think you're trying to say that you're amazed that you can just throw away all the bad things in your life, but I'm not completely sure. If you edit, I'd try to make this a little clearer.
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