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Strings and Sinews (Free verse) by aburiedlife

so i take a broken seashell and scrape out everthing dead and dying from inside my chest and end up lighter and finally clean but colder than i have ever been staying warm just as long as i keep walking because i came to one day thrown clear of the wreckage amazed that i could just walk away

boldsilence 22-Jun-04/11:31 AM
It's confusing. I think you're trying to say that you're amazed that you can just throw away all the bad things in your life, but I'm not completely sure. If you edit, I'd try to make this a little clearer.




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