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I miss you still (Free verse) by beck2457

I Miss You Still… ...2,122 days 12 hours 58 minutes 183,387,540 heartbeats from the night we parted I miss you still Infinite tears Songs, memories, places Always present Wanting to escape No where to run No where to turn Broken hearted Too scared to fight Too scared to loose I miss you still Years gone by Tears are distant and tears are few I think of you Where are you? How’s your life? Wondering what memories you cherish, Which you have chosen to forget, I too have those, which I choose and choose not to Remember and forget I miss you still Becky Betancourt 5/26/03

Dovina 2-Aug-04/12:46 PM
I-miss-you poems are very common. They can be good if free from the usual cliches and having something more than the usual that this has.




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