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The Editor (Free verse) by Dovina
Had he given me just one,
or half a dozen from his cache,
poems to read and check,
and make suggestions on,
Iâd judge each one by look and feel,
like buying fruit from unknown trees.
But after holding, feeling forty,
I sense a tree with grafted limbs.
The fruit grow each unique,
but carry something from the whole.
I almost see the trunk and branches,
how they spread and where they aim,
their bent and pretty form.
My tone is altered by such poems.
In seeing things unseen by him,
I see them partly through his eyes.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.625
Weighted score: 5.43703
Overall Rank: 3017
Posted: April 30, 2007 2:45 PM PDT; Last modified: April 30, 2007 2:45 PM PDT
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The transience of life.....
Wasted moments won't return
my final tears are to come
the dream has just begun
Ever with me
Beyond my dreams
beyond your tone
beyond unexplained pains
here in my soul
I passed them by
in the transience of life.....
A transient life - yes
Wasted moments won't return - yes
My final tears might have already come
What is this dream that's just begun?
Ever with you?
And how can it be beyond dreams?
And beyond my tone - ok
beyond pains - ok
in your soul - ok
What did you passed by?
in the transience of life.....