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Falling Alone (Free verse) by FadedHappiness
I walk through the rain Through heavens tears falling down I stand above your grave and I begin to think. Is this how love should be? Should I hold onto you forever? Or does love fade within time? Or does love stay and never grow old? I decide to walk away dodging the tears I decide to forget you ever excisted But your memory is etched inside my mind You haunt me in my dreams and thoughts Love IS a never ending circle but what if some of us fall You fell and I jumped with you But you gave up on me I continue to fall down into the darkness Alone and frightened Noone catching me Noone noticing I'm gone I will always fall Fall into the never ending darkness

Up the ladder: A Permanent Fixture
Down the ladder: An Ode To An Angel

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.25
Weighted score: 5.6051183
Overall Rank: 2295
Posted: August 15, 2004 4:13 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2004 4:13 PM PDT
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[8] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 15-Aug-04/5:47 PM | Reply
To the one you hung up on,
This is not bad at all. Surprised? Not being noticed by someone who should care is a very sad feeling. Sometimes the only one who takes notice is one who should not rightly care. Therein lies the gold in an otherwise sandy desert that it's best to get used to.
"existed" "No one"
[7] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.140 | 18-Aug-04/5:42 AM | Reply
very good ..that's a nice poem ..i like it
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