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Falling Alone (Free verse) by FadedHappiness
I walk through the rain
Through heavens tears falling down
I stand above your grave
and I begin to think.
Is this how love should be?
Should I hold onto you forever?
Or does love fade within time?
Or does love stay and never grow old?
I decide to walk away dodging the tears
I decide to forget you ever excisted
But your memory is etched inside my mind
You haunt me in my dreams and thoughts
Love IS a never ending circle
but what if some of us fall
You fell and I jumped with you
But you gave up on me
I continue to fall down into the darkness
Alone and frightened
Noone catching me
Noone noticing I'm gone
I will always fall
Fall into the never ending darkness
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.25
Weighted score: 5.6051183
Overall Rank: 2295
Posted: August 15, 2004 4:13 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2004 4:13 PM PDT
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This is not bad at all. Surprised? Not being noticed by someone who should care is a very sad feeling. Sometimes the only one who takes notice is one who should not rightly care. Therein lies the gold in an otherwise sandy desert that it's best to get used to.
"existed" "No one"