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Falling Alone (Free verse) by FadedHappiness

I walk through the rain Through heavens tears falling down I stand above your grave and I begin to think. Is this how love should be? Should I hold onto you forever? Or does love fade within time? Or does love stay and never grow old? I decide to walk away dodging the tears I decide to forget you ever excisted But your memory is etched inside my mind You haunt me in my dreams and thoughts Love IS a never ending circle but what if some of us fall You fell and I jumped with you But you gave up on me I continue to fall down into the darkness Alone and frightened Noone catching me Noone noticing I'm gone I will always fall Fall into the never ending darkness

Prince of Void 18-Aug-04/5:42 AM
very good ..that's a nice poem ..i like it




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