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The Chaos (Other) by Prince of Void The Chaos
I see the world with claws of wars
Is lost in the waves of chaos
The nightmare bothers me
the Despair is above me
the Shadows follow me
I see the images of doom day
It took years
I become a mystic
In the world
There is no believer
They are just only consumer
Within the chaos
They live and die
So chasing the unwanted dawn
Led me find myself as the tiny ray
Try to keep the decaying day away
As the people become more
Hollow then before
Shall I be the tiny ray?
That can be far from here
From the chaos upon the destiny
Shall I be the odyssey?
Achieving eternity
The answer is in infinity
Up the ladder:
Intro
Down the ladder:
you may find yourself here
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Posted: July 31, 2004 1:55 PM PDT; Last modified: July 31, 2004 1:55 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6747 Comments:
Take Dovina's advice and lose the first satanza
better saying for that is this below
Despairing seed into this depth of earth that is the arm of chaos 254 view(s)
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I'd like to see the ending be more definitive.
I became a mystic
They are just consumers
Led me to find myself
Trying to keep the decaying day away
As the people become more hollow