| Re: Ode to a Friend by tadpole |
2-Feb-05/8:29 AM |
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Must be a terrible thirst!
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| Re: Ebony shadow by Twiggy77 |
11-Nov-04/12:00 AM |
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O.K. NOW I see that yer a Brit, Haven't voted, or commented on anything. read read read. comment, visit, learn. Welcome.
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| Re: Ebony shadow by Twiggy77 |
10-Nov-04/11:57 PM |
The shadow of THIS mortal CONSTANTLY questions my fate, But it's all about morals anyway! Right?
A few miscpewings. elliminate the dash between mime artist. Other than that???
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| Re: Thereâs A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1 |
10-Nov-04/11:43 PM |
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If this is what you want do say, that's o.k, But re-write, again and again. Where to begin? In the first stanza, using dread, and then beating it 'till it's dead, No. Buy a Thesourus, find a chorus, and next time... try not to bore us. But KEEP WRITING.
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| Re: Bowie Still Gives Me a Bonner by phauge |
10-Nov-04/11:19 PM |
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| Re: A Spring bird in November (Edit) by Sasha |
10-Nov-04/11:17 PM |
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I especially like the comparison,unclear roads...
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| Re: Knives by SwiftFox |
10-Nov-04/11:15 PM |
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It's a good thought,Really good. But I think you should think it through further. Expand, expound, eh?
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| Re: a comment on Insurance Frauds by skaskowski |
7-Nov-04/2:07 PM |
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Probably the best probable choice.
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| Re: corrupting you by skaskowski |
7-Nov-04/2:04 PM |
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Made me chuckle, actually.
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| Re: corrupting me by skaskowski |
7-Nov-04/2:03 PM |
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| Re: take it easy by skaskowski |
7-Nov-04/2:02 PM |
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Probably more worried about the transition.
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| Re: behind the mirror by skaskowski |
7-Nov-04/2:01 PM |
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| Re: scarecrow saviour by skaskowski |
7-Nov-04/2:00 PM |
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WOW! guess I'm stuck here for a while. Well Done.
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| Re: leaping into loss by skaskowski |
7-Nov-04/1:57 PM |
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At the mention of concrete, my perception changed right away. At first I imagined this in the mountains or something. Well written and profound. It has an interpretation all it's own for me.
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| Re: Draw Me A Pretty Picture by cuddlytiger17 |
2-Nov-04/8:56 PM |
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DAMN Cuddly one. Tis the best yet, in my humble opinion. A light bright enough? BRILLIANT! Yes!
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| Re: An Arrow and a Knife by blues |
2-Nov-04/8:52 PM |
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Guess it didn't work out huh? Move on man, there's more to life. Much.
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| Re: Ash by horus8 |
2-Nov-04/8:37 PM |
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Very well done Hoarus, I truly enjoyed this piece. It reminds me of my dad's favorite poem... I pass by a poor old farmhouse, It's shingles broken and black. Good Imagery
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| Re: Two Years by berdabear |
2-Nov-04/8:33 PM |
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I can feel the echoes of your love in the words you have written. Thank you for sharing them.
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| Re: a comment on Transposed by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
27-Oct-04/6:54 PM |
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OOOOH, I do feel good. I love life. PERIOD. And I don't have a problem w/ you personally. OH, WAIT, who are you? I mean you give me so many 0's w/ so many people I just don't know. Sometimes I just want to go thro' the list and just retaliate. Is my poetry that BAD? I mean 00000? I have never IN MY LIFE read a poem that was worth nothing. NEVER. Every poem ever written whether by poe or wadsworth or shelley or me is worth something< EH?
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| Re: Turbulence by horus8 |
27-Oct-04/6:31 PM |
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Here you are again with anoyher f******n 0 on my poetry? I don't make five suedonimmmes of myself to give you hateful scores. WHY?>
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