on Ode to a Friend by tadpole
2 Feb 2005, 8:29 AM
Must be a terrible thirst!
on Ebony shadow by Twiggy77
11 Nov 2004, 12:00 AM
O.K. NOW I see that yer a Brit, Haven't voted, or commented on anything. read read read. comment, visit, learn. Welcome.
on Ebony shadow by Twiggy77
10 Nov 2004, 11:57 PM
The shadow of THIS mortal CONSTANTLY questions my fate, But it's all about morals anyway! Right?
A few miscpewings. elliminate the dash between mime artist. Other than that???
A few miscpewings. elliminate the dash between mime artist. Other than that???
on Thereâs A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1
10 Nov 2004, 11:43 PM
If this is what you want do say, that's o.k, But re-write, again and again. Where to begin? In the first stanza, using dread, and then beating it 'till it's dead, No. Buy a Thesourus, find a chorus, and next time... try not to bore us. But KEEP WRITING.
on Bowie Still Gives Me a Bonner by phauge
10 Nov 2004, 11:19 PM
No
on A Spring bird in November (Edit) by Sasha
10 Nov 2004, 11:17 PM
I especially like the comparison,unclear roads...
replying on Insurance Frauds by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:07 PM
Probably the best probable choice.
on corrupting you by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:04 PM
Made me chuckle, actually.
on corrupting me by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:03 PM
ouch
on take it easy by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:02 PM
Probably more worried about the transition.
on behind the mirror by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:01 PM
Been there!
on scarecrow saviour by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 2:00 PM
WOW! guess I'm stuck here for a while. Well Done.
on leaping into loss by skaskowski
7 Nov 2004, 1:57 PM
At the mention of concrete, my perception changed right away. At first I imagined this in the mountains or something. Well written and profound. It has an interpretation all it's own for me.
on Draw Me A Pretty Picture by cuddlytiger17
2 Nov 2004, 8:56 PM
DAMN Cuddly one. Tis the best yet, in my humble opinion. A light bright enough? BRILLIANT! Yes!
on An Arrow and a Knife by blues
2 Nov 2004, 8:52 PM
Guess it didn't work out huh? Move on man, there's more to life. Much.
replying on Transposed by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Oct 2004, 6:54 PM
OOOOH, I do feel good. I love life. PERIOD. And I don't have a problem w/ you personally. OH, WAIT, who are you? I mean you give me so many 0's w/ so many people I just don't know. Sometimes I just want to go thro' the list and just retaliate. Is my poetry that BAD? I mean 00000? I have never IN MY LIFE read a poem that was worth nothing. NEVER. Every poem ever written whether by poe or wadsworth or shelley or me is worth something< EH?
on Turbulence by horus8
27 Oct 2004, 6:31 PM
Here you are again with anoyher f******n 0 on my poetry? I don't make five suedonimmmes of myself to give you hateful scores. WHY?>