poemranker ::scarecrow saviour by skaskowski

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Free verse № 113941

scarecrow saviour

Member since 2001 · Posted 19 Oct 2004 · 2 comments

You were a movement under the fallen leaves, a torrent of clothing discarded by the trees had displaced you from standing and left you stuck and panting for the brisk and crisp autumn air to blow back through your hair. I saw a hand poking through and stretched my wooden arm out and you grabbed and tugged but only clutched a twig to wave desperately after.

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[10] sliver 7-Nov-04/2:00 PM Reply
WOW! guess I'm stuck here for a while. Well Done.
[8] celticskatermatt1 19-Nov-04/8:40 PM Reply
pretty good------chelsea