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scarecrow saviour (Free verse) by skaskowski
You were
a movement
under
the fallen leaves,
a torrent of clothing
discarded
by the trees
had displaced you from standing
and
left you stuck and panting
for the brisk and crisp
autumn air
to blow back through your hair.
I saw a hand poking through and
stretched my wooden arm out and you
grabbed and tugged but only clutched
a twig to wave desperately after.
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Posted: October 19, 2004 10:52 AM PDT; Last modified: October 19, 2004 10:52 AM PDT
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