| Re: the coming of Fall by Sasha |
26-Oct-04/8:57 PM |
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This rings home for me. I've been asked to come cut down some trees from the Hayman burn area on the Eastern slope Of the Colorado Rockies(Just about 50 miles from my home). Turns out I used to picnic where these people are building a house.
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| Re: What is a poet by INTRANSIT |
26-Oct-04/8:53 PM |
So true. the part about the poison.
Hey , do me a favor, read my poem into my world, acrostic. Tell me what you think. It made it to the top ten in less than a week. But personally, I think it's kinda weak.
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| Re: a comment on Transposed by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
24-Oct-04/7:58 PM |
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| Re: Transposed by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
24-Oct-04/7:54 PM |
Just stopped by to return the favor. If it's any consolation I don't care for your collection of meaningless shit than you do for mine, but I don't take the time to log in to my multiple personalities
and give you more than one score. Just one, from me.
I have seen a few things in your words that have made me stop to think, but you aren't running a really good race in life. I'm not a psycologist, but if you are really the way you are, you need one. he he heee...
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| Re: For Ike by INTRANSIT |
24-Oct-04/7:29 PM |
Sometimes the carbon copy smears, and these are the things we are left with.
It's funny, man, I was listening to the radio when I read this, and they were playing Ace In The Hole, by George Strait...
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| Re: Nothing's Forever by cuddlytiger17 |
8-Oct-04/7:03 PM |
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Nothing like a nice hot shower huh?
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| Re: Flying things by INTRANSIT |
27-Sep-04/1:36 PM |
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Where ya bin? Haven't heard from ya in a while. Thought maybe you drove your truck to Cuba or something. How'd you get the plane down at the chicken farm?
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| Re: a comment on a night of solitude by Faulk |
17-Sep-04/4:39 PM |
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Well, you don't have to read it Ass, just tryin' to communicate.
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| Re: a comment on Lost by arduinn |
11-Sep-04/7:33 AM |
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Yea? and I like yers. BTW, I am also NoSage, It's my name, jason, pronounced backwards. c ya
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| Re: Lost by arduinn |
10-Sep-04/3:59 PM |
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Well, it appears that two of my poems have made their way to Arduinn's favorites list. To what do I owe this fine pleasure? thank you for the compliment!
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| Re: a comment on Into My World by sliver |
7-Sep-04/10:21 AM |
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It's not real easy to write like this, I thought it came out fairly well
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| Re: Adorasi by avery |
6-Sep-04/10:16 AM |
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I believe this describes Renee as well.You must really like Isadora eh? Emotions tamed in words where spirits can't be trapped.
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| Re: a comment on Into My World by sliver |
6-Sep-04/10:13 AM |
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Thank you Dan. Very much.
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| Re: a comment on Into My World by sliver |
6-Sep-04/10:12 AM |
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Renee Blue Eyes, The first letters in each line. I believe that makes it acrostic. The first two lines signify her beauty, and my attraction to it. And Snow White pales in Renee's mirror. You know, mirror mirror on the wall...
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| Re: a comment on Isadora by avery |
6-Sep-04/7:32 AM |
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Then I gine you a ten. I wrote one of these last night and now I see how difficult it is. Read mine and tell me what you think?
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| Re: Isadora by avery |
5-Sep-04/5:10 PM |
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| Re: The Little Merman by avery |
5-Sep-04/5:08 PM |
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Yea, umm, no. kinda lost it somewhere around the third stanza, or was it the first?
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| Re: A Poem by BigB |
5-Sep-04/5:01 PM |
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I would have to agree w/ Dovina, The crappy title makes me expect a crappy poem, You have a good image here, but you need to knead it a little more.
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| Re: Edges by Blue Magpie |
5-Sep-04/4:57 PM |
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I have enjoyed this immensly, and you danced around many of the edges I walk in life. Well written, well thought out. Definite-10-
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| Re: Like A Rainbow by jasondingus |
5-Sep-04/4:50 PM |
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Why can't she be the yellow and you the blue, or maybe purple?
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