poemranker ::For Ike by INTRANSIT

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Prose Poem № 114081

For Ike

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Oct 2004 · 6 comments

Jesus Ike, It's so hot in St.Louis today. The humidity is smothering me from the inside and it's hard to concentrate with the salt running down my face. If I had been given a choice between you and the other owners, I still would have chosen the man with the silver birch hair heavy with wisdom. I was so jealous of that hair. I wanted to know what you knew. Hindsight hits like a brick to the head. Whenever I had a question you were my ace-in-the-hole, only a phone call away. And I could always count on your rare and random appearances to bring me a message from a distant time like the super black and monolithic american roadways. And if this pain is so so bright like Kansas during the sunflower bloom, how much greater goodness left by your life for so many others to consume? You're such a beautiful asshole for deciding to wear the ivory parchment. Though you've left us, you're still here. Like a cars' annoying crash avoidance warning, or the welcoming keys-in-the-ignition bell letting us know there's still enough battery left to start the engine, again.

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6 comments

[10] horus8 23-Oct-04/4:10 PM Reply
Best thing you've ever written.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › horus8 23-Oct-04/4:28 PM Reply
Thank you.
[10] SupremeDreamer 23-Oct-04/9:05 PM Reply
Indeed.
[9] sliver 24-Oct-04/7:29 PM Reply
Sometimes the carbon copy smears, and these are the things we are left with.
It's funny, man, I was listening to the radio when I read this, and they were playing Ace In The Hole, by George Strait...
[10] Dan garcia-Black 25-Oct-04/10:27 AM Reply
I liked Ike but not as much as I like your poem.
[10] [mojo] 16-Nov-04/9:46 AM Reply
Excellent. I was needing a little bit of rhyme and along it came... bang on time. V nice.