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For Ike (Prose Poem) by INTRANSIT
Jesus Ike,
It's so hot in St.Louis today. The humidity
is smothering me from the inside and it's hard to
concentrate with the salt running down my face. If I had been given a
choice between you and the other owners, I still would have chosen the
man with the silver birch hair
heavy with wisdom. I was so jealous of that hair. I wanted to know what
you knew. Hindsight hits like a brick to the head. Whenever I had a
question you were my ace-in-the-hole,
only a phone call away. And I could always count on your
rare and random appearances to bring me a message from a
distant time like the super black and monolithic american
roadways.
And if this pain is so so bright
like Kansas during the sunflower bloom,
how much greater goodness left by your life
for so many others to consume?
You're such a beautiful asshole for deciding to wear the
ivory parchment. Though you've left us, you're still here.
Like a cars' annoying crash avoidance warning, or the welcoming keys-in-
the-ignition bell letting us know
there's still enough battery left to start the engine,
again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1277
Posted: October 23, 2004 8:36 AM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2004 8:36 AM PDT
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