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Nothing's Forever (Pimple) by cuddlytiger17
Serenity in a misty steam of heaven Silence all around Nothing heard but the softness of my breaths: Inhale. Exhale. All is safe, secure. But then the water runs cold. I let out a yelp of alarm, And realize nothing lasts forever.

Up the ladder: A season of construction
Down the ladder: Black

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4485
Posted: October 6, 2004 6:21 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2004 6:21 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] Caducus @ 172.202.31.145 | 7-Oct-04/9:01 AM | Reply
too good to be a pimple where is the blood and whining?
[9] sliver @ 63.190.81.105 | 8-Oct-04/7:03 PM | Reply
Nothing like a nice hot shower huh?
[n/a] cuddlytiger17 @ 209.105.136.62 > sliver | 8-Oct-04/8:18 PM | Reply
lol nopes. gotta love it.
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