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Nothing's Forever (Pimple) by cuddlytiger17 Serenity in a misty steam of heaven
Silence all around
Nothing heard but the softness of my breaths:
Inhale.
Exhale.
All is safe, secure.
But then the water runs cold.
I let out a yelp of alarm,
And realize nothing lasts forever.
Up the ladder:
Dreamtigers (Borges)
Down the ladder:
quetzalcoatl
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Posted: October 6, 2004 6:21 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2004 6:21 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2086053 Overall Rank: 4470 Comments:
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Caducus @ 172.202.31.145
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7-Oct-04/9:01 AM
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too good to be a pimple where is the blood and whining?
Nothing like a nice hot shower huh?
lol nopes. gotta love it.
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