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A season of construction (Free verse) by fair12
I’ve driven the same route home for two weeks now, since the roads have been devoured by plastic match-stick men their over-sized Tonka trucks coughing black dust through air ways, their cones on every lane I watch the road wind like a slinky, cars rolling around the curves, home their only destination I watch the way the trees stretch their matte green leaves into the fading sun and wonder what colors their deaths will bring wonder if the locusts and crickets will chirp a song for the dieing before burrowing into earth and all the soil settles, a grave for every death there’s something to be said about autumn, its sad winds chilly and destined to weep the hard rains that lead to winter I think winter is calling us; a Southern Comfort voice in the coming darkness, beckoning each of us home, a reminder to stay in from the cold

Down the ladder: Black

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4490
Posted: September 28, 2004 1:52 PM PDT; Last modified: September 28, 2004 1:52 PM PDT
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[7] maffy @ 81.130.183.10 | 30-Sep-04/5:26 AM | Reply
kind of dinged my dong :7
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