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A season of construction (Free verse) by fair12
Iâve driven the same route home
for two weeks now, since the roads
have been devoured
by plastic match-stick men
their over-sized Tonka trucks
coughing black dust through
air ways, their cones on every lane
I watch the road wind like a slinky,
cars rolling around the curves,
home their only destination
I watch the way the trees stretch
their matte green leaves
into the fading sun and wonder
what colors their deaths will bring
wonder if the locusts and crickets
will chirp a song for the dieing
before burrowing into earth
and all the soil settles,
a grave for every death
thereâs something to be said
about autumn, its sad winds
chilly and destined to weep
the hard rains that lead to winter
I think winter is calling us;
a Southern Comfort voice
in the coming darkness, beckoning
each of us home, a reminder
to stay in from the cold
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4490
Posted: September 28, 2004 1:52 PM PDT; Last modified: September 28, 2004 1:52 PM PDT
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