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Adorasi (Acrostic) by avery Ivory skin;
hazel pupils that radiate passion
Sui generis;
a true original, thus far incomparable
Arcane at moments;
simplistic yet with acuity
Delectable young gamine;
wandering in her very own Cockaigne of mirth
Oh, why art thou blessed with such beauty?
Rambunctious;
untamed for none to own as property
Aphrodite's child;
her smile capable of decimating men's hearts
Up the ladder:
come with me
Down the ladder:
real fright of going home
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Posted: September 6, 2004 9:11 AM PDT; Last modified: September 6, 2004 9:11 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11844 Comments:
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sliver @ 63.190.64.53
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6-Sep-04/10:16 AM
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I believe this describes Renee as well.You must really like Isadora eh? Emotions tamed in words where spirits can't be trapped.
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