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Free verse № 71579

Rush

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Oct 2003 · 2 comments

This thing inside me is rising like A fucking Vulcano I start to freak out on Everyone I know I’m looking for a way out But there’s no where to go I need to run away But I’m moving too damn slow If I don't get a grip soon I'm going to Fucking explode Squeeze my neck hard And blow a streamlined load I’m scratching my flesh Hoping to dig up some flow Thought I found copper But it turned into gold Can’t stop now when I thought this shit was old Gotta find my heart And stand up right and bold Cuz this is the greatest Story ever fucking told And It’s Mine

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[2] Wobble McFly 23-Oct-03/3:28 AM Reply
GAY
[n/a] J.B. Manning › Wobble McFly 23-Oct-03/1:15 PM Reply
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