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What is a poet (Free verse) by INTRANSIT A poet
is a stainless steel porcupine
loaded with poison ink quills
caffiene blood
and a twitchy hair trigger tail
set to go off in all directions.
At once.
Up the ladder:
Forbidden Fruit(2)
Down the ladder:
I wish I was a chav
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Posted: October 1, 2004 6:00 AM PDT; Last modified: October 1, 2004 6:00 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.806824 Overall Rank: 1679 Comments:
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Dovina @ 204.250.12.246
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4-Oct-04/5:30 AM
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How do porcupines make love, particularly the hair-trigger kind? I ask because of this poisonous twitch. It's getting in the way.
So true. the part about the poison.
Hey , do me a favor, read my poem into my world, acrostic. Tell me what you think. It made it to the top ten in less than a week. But personally, I think it's kinda weak. 241 view(s)
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