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Upon Arrival of Flight 179 to DIA (Free verse) by MacFrantic
It never occurred that the word "fresh" was applied to Mozart "To me" never meant so much Tomorrow isn't coming fast enough is it? Question with a question aside, I never saw that coming but The Devil must be a Cubs fan cause hell is staying mighty hot I flew nine thousand miles for a cup of coffee So cold that it did the trick If you don't believe me ask my parrot Sam 'cause he wants a cracker Worse than I need a haircut "Beyond the end," someone said "is…"

Up the ladder: SWF seeks SWM
Down the ladder: two

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.806824
Overall Rank: 1676
Posted: February 19, 2004 11:58 AM PST; Last modified: February 19, 2004 11:58 AM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 19-Feb-04/4:40 PM | Reply
My buns cry feebly from my slacks.
[10] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.234.177 | 19-Feb-04/7:22 PM | Reply
I admire your disregard for the stale conventions of punctuation. It makes the poem so much more ambiguous and less eloquent. Excellent! I also like the way the sudden mention of a parrot seems so wacky and obscure. -10-
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