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Upon Arrival of Flight 179 to DIA

by MacFrantic

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Feb 2004 · 2 comments

It never occurred that the word "fresh" was applied to Mozart "To me" never meant so much Tomorrow isn't coming fast enough is it? Question with a question aside, I never saw that coming but The Devil must be a Cubs fan cause hell is staying mighty hot I flew nine thousand miles for a cup of coffee So cold that it did the trick If you don't believe me ask my parrot Sam 'cause he wants a cracker Worse than I need a haircut "Beyond the end," someone said "is…"

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[n/a] deleted user 19-Feb-04/4:40 PM Reply
My buns cry feebly from my slacks.
[10] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Feb-04/7:22 PM Reply
I admire your disregard for the stale conventions of punctuation. It makes the poem so much more ambiguous and less eloquent. Excellent! I also like the way the sudden mention of a parrot seems so wacky and obscure. -10-