Replying to a comment on:

Upon Arrival of Flight 179 to DIA (Free verse) by MacFrantic

It never occurred that the word "fresh" was applied to Mozart "To me" never meant so much Tomorrow isn't coming fast enough is it? Question with a question aside, I never saw that coming but The Devil must be a Cubs fan cause hell is staying mighty hot I flew nine thousand miles for a cup of coffee So cold that it did the trick If you don't believe me ask my parrot Sam 'cause he wants a cracker Worse than I need a haircut "Beyond the end," someone said "is…"

?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Feb-04/7:22 PM
I admire your disregard for the stale conventions of punctuation. It makes the poem so much more ambiguous and less eloquent. Excellent! I also like the way the sudden mention of a parrot seems so wacky and obscure. -10-




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001