Re: Untitled by http://mulberryfairy	28-Apr-05/7:50 PM
And with that he's gone. Now you're changing sides?
Re: a comment on Censor by nentwined	28-Apr-05/12:26 PM
It would work alot better if you could roll your word endings down, if you know what I mean. It would show how your thoughts have a tendency to droop at times.
Re: a comment on Censor by nentwined	28-Apr-05/12:23 PM
It does get the point acrost better now tho'. Some times it's like that.
Re: Censor by nentwined	28-Apr-05/12:08 PM
I don't get the le part.
Re: a comment on Front Range Toll Road by sliver	7-Apr-05/9:30 PM
What about the revised version?
Re: Arab Shepherd (a belief poem for Dovina) by zodiac	6-Apr-05/10:42 PM
And yet still you stand.
Re: a comment on Prayer For The Church by sliver	6-Apr-05/10:19 PM
Yes, I did ask for a specific, isn't that what we all do most of the time? Dear God, I want a pony with a white mane and a little spot on his nose. Thank You. Do you ever really pray? Do you understand the efficacy of prayer? If you did, you would understand. Do you know what the rosary is? If you have no FAITH? OOH that's a strong word, and it means so much.
Re: a comment on Prayer For The Church by sliver	6-Apr-05/10:08 PM
I merely ask that St Joseph, as the foster father of Our Lord, and the protector of the Church,consider the state of the Church, as it is today, and help them to elect a leader with the strength to do what is right. To bring Catholics back to the truth, and maybe the rest.
Re: Gabriel by tadpole	14-Mar-05/7:49 PM
A good image, I just like the way it sounds.
Re: Loves Struggle by hummers86	20-Feb-05/5:59 PM
Are you decomposing in that lye in your bed?
Re: a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove	14-Feb-05/11:15 PM
You seemed to be chasing your tail for a bit, But really quite well written. Me likey
Re: a comment on Epitaph of Innocence by woodstock20000	9-Feb-05/10:12 PM
Actually, I think prayer is our only hope now.
Re: Epitaph of Innocence by woodstock20000	9-Feb-05/10:11 PM
I would tend to agree, We are losing our sense of morality
Re: The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry	7-Feb-05/10:41 PM
I am at a loss for words. I love the way you mixed it all up, And painted such a picture.
Re: Back Off by erin35	7-Feb-05/10:32 PM
This one just feels kind of stilted, for lack of a better word. Maybe choppy, no. well, I ramble. Perhaps just a bit smoother? Or... maybe it's just me, what the hell do I know.
Re: Provision by erin35	7-Feb-05/10:29 PM
Trapped in the same circle as the rest of us, I see. Welome to the other side of humanity.
Re: Weary by erin35	7-Feb-05/10:26 PM
Yea, I feel it too. What can ya' do?
Re: Call of the Moon by arduinn	2-Feb-05/2:38 PM
Don't we all.
Re: A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere	2-Feb-05/8:45 AM
Enjoyable reading
Re: Life by AmberDawn	2-Feb-05/8:34 AM
Some misspelling, Your metre is off also. Just a word or two omitted or added in places may help some.While I admit compromise does often help, there are times when you absolutely cannot give on an issue.