poemranker ::20 most recent comments by sliver (61-80) and replies

Comments bysliver, 61–80 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Untitled by http://mulberryfairy 28 Apr 2005, 7:50 PM
And with that he's gone. Now you're changing sides?
replying on Censor by nentwined 28 Apr 2005, 12:26 PM
It would work alot better if you could roll your word endings down, if you know what I mean. It would show how your thoughts have a tendency to droop at times.
replying on Censor by nentwined 28 Apr 2005, 12:23 PM
It does get the point acrost better now tho'. Some times it's like that.
on Censor by nentwined 28 Apr 2005, 12:08 PM
I don't get the le part.
replying on Front Range Toll Road by sliver 7 Apr 2005, 9:30 PM
What about the revised version?
on Arab Shepherd (a belief poem for Dovina) by zodiac 6 Apr 2005, 10:42 PM
And yet still you stand.
replying on Prayer For The Church by sliver 6 Apr 2005, 10:19 PM
Yes, I did ask for a specific, isn't that what we all do most of the time? Dear God, I want a pony with a white mane and a little spot on his nose. Thank You.
Do you ever really pray? Do you understand the efficacy of prayer? If you did, you would understand. Do you know what the rosary is? If you have no FAITH? OOH that's a strong word, and it means so much.
replying on Prayer For The Church by sliver 6 Apr 2005, 10:08 PM
I merely ask that St Joseph, as the foster father of Our Lord, and the protector of the Church,consider the state of the Church,
as it is today, and help them to elect a leader with the strength to do what is right. To bring Catholics back to the truth, and maybe the rest.
on Gabriel by tadpole 14 Mar 2005, 7:49 PM
A good image, I just like the way it sounds.
on Loves Struggle by hummers86 20 Feb 2005, 5:59 PM
Are you decomposing in that lye in your bed?
on a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove 14 Feb 2005, 11:15 PM
You seemed to be chasing your tail for a bit, But really quite well written. Me likey
replying on Epitaph of Innocence by woodstock20000 9 Feb 2005, 10:12 PM
Actually, I think prayer is our only hope now.
on Epitaph of Innocence by woodstock20000 9 Feb 2005, 10:11 PM
I would tend to agree, We are losing our sense of morality
on The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry 7 Feb 2005, 10:41 PM
I am at a loss for words. I love the way you mixed it all up, And painted such a picture.
on Back Off by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 10:32 PM
This one just feels kind of stilted, for lack of a better word. Maybe choppy, no. well, I ramble. Perhaps just a bit smoother? Or... maybe it's just me, what the hell do I know.
on Provision by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 10:29 PM
Trapped in the same circle as the rest of us, I see.
Welome to the other side of humanity.
on Weary by erin35 7 Feb 2005, 10:26 PM
Yea, I feel it too. What can ya' do?
on Call of the Moon by arduinn 2 Feb 2005, 2:38 PM
Don't we all.
on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere 2 Feb 2005, 8:45 AM
Enjoyable reading
on Life by AmberDawn 2 Feb 2005, 8:34 AM
Some misspelling, Your metre is off also. Just a word or two omitted or added in places may help some.While I admit compromise does often help, there are times when you absolutely cannot give on an issue.