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Free verse № 75930

Loves Struggle

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

Ever changing this world Ever lasting this love, Whether near whether far Forever two of a dove Miles not noticed When tested against, The bond of true love An eternal presence When all was thought lost Or feeling amiss, The sound of your voice Brings the warmth of a kiss Time and time again Silent cursing of why, Flow through my head To which I’d rather die Then I’m reminded There’s always a purpose, What’s not understood Will rise to the surface For how long will it last? Before I will learn, This struggle in life When will it turn? While still unclear The reason unknown, My trust is in you In you alone I give you my doubt I lay down my life, You take away the pain And relinquish my strife You comfort with bliss You take away fears, When I fret about love You wipe away tears The past is the past And the future ahead, Be with me now As I lye here in bed

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[10] ShaNoN+960317485 19-Nov-03/11:54 PM Reply
:o)
[7] sliver 20-Feb-05/5:59 PM Reply
Are you decomposing in that lye in your bed?