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Loves Struggle (Free verse) by hummers86
Ever changing this world
Ever lasting this love,
Whether near whether far
Forever two of a dove
Miles not noticed
When tested against,
The bond of true love
An eternal presence
When all was thought lost
Or feeling amiss,
The sound of your voice
Brings the warmth of a kiss
Time and time again
Silent cursing of why,
Flow through my head
To which Iâd rather die
Then Iâm reminded
Thereâs always a purpose,
Whatâs not understood
Will rise to the surface
For how long will it last?
Before I will learn,
This struggle in life
When will it turn?
While still unclear
The reason unknown,
My trust is in you
In you alone
I give you my doubt
I lay down my life,
You take away the pain
And relinquish my strife
You comfort with bliss
You take away fears,
When I fret about love
You wipe away tears
The past is the past
And the future ahead,
Be with me now
As I lye here in bed
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Posted: November 18, 2003 6:18 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2003 6:18 PM PST
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