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Loves Struggle (Free verse) by hummers86
Ever changing this world Ever lasting this love, Whether near whether far Forever two of a dove Miles not noticed When tested against, The bond of true love An eternal presence When all was thought lost Or feeling amiss, The sound of your voice Brings the warmth of a kiss Time and time again Silent cursing of why, Flow through my head To which I’d rather die Then I’m reminded There’s always a purpose, What’s not understood Will rise to the surface For how long will it last? Before I will learn, This struggle in life When will it turn? While still unclear The reason unknown, My trust is in you In you alone I give you my doubt I lay down my life, You take away the pain And relinquish my strife You comfort with bliss You take away fears, When I fret about love You wipe away tears The past is the past And the future ahead, Be with me now As I lye here in bed

Up the ladder: only you
Down the ladder: Lufituaeb

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6471
Posted: November 18, 2003 6:18 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2003 6:18 PM PST
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[10] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 19-Nov-03/11:54 PM | Reply
:o)
[7] sliver @ 172.163.35.86 | 20-Feb-05/5:59 PM | Reply
Are you decomposing in that lye in your bed?
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