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Epitaph of Innocence (Ode) by woodstock20000 Innocence has passed away;
But no one seems to care.
Exactly when it met its fate,
we simply aren't aware.
The poor old thing
just bowed its head
and croaked,
right then and there.
And now this shameful world is lost
and gone, without a prayer.
Up the ladder:
tanka(4)
Down the ladder:
i'm falling for u damnit!
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Posted: February 9, 2005 7:24 AM PST; Last modified: February 9, 2005 7:24 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7683 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.10.103
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9-Feb-05/2:11 PM
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Nonsense! The world is not lost as you say. 0 for content, 5 for poetic form.
I would tend to agree, We are losing our sense of morality
Actually, I think prayer is our only hope now.
Some people never pray. They must have no sense of morality.
Like a good little boy, I only pray when I REALLY, REALLY want something from the big guy.
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