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Ode № 119858

Epitaph of Innocence

by woodstock20000

Member since 2005 · Posted 9 Feb 2005 · 5 comments

Innocence has passed away; But no one seems to care. Exactly when it met its fate, we simply aren't aware. The poor old thing just bowed its head and croaked, right then and there. And now this shameful world is lost and gone, without a prayer.

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[5] Dovina 9-Feb-05/2:11 PM Reply
Nonsense! The world is not lost as you say. 0 for content, 5 for poetic form.
[8] sliver 9-Feb-05/10:11 PM Reply
I would tend to agree, We are losing our sense of morality
[8] sliver › sliver 9-Feb-05/10:12 PM Reply
Actually, I think prayer is our only hope now.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › sliver 10-Feb-05/3:58 AM Reply
Some people never pray. They must have no sense of morality.
[n/a] wilco › sliver 10-Feb-05/4:08 PM Reply
Like a good little boy, I only pray when I REALLY, REALLY want something from the big guy.