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Desperation (Free verse) by gavinduff
Obscuring disclosure murmuring secrets a soul's thoughts a breathless rendez-vous please and cries indulging whispers for I am delicious desperation.

Up the ladder: An A to Z of Tards
Down the ladder: Unsung california dreamin.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7693
Posted: July 12, 2004 8:20 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2004 8:20 AM PDT
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[10] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.122.216 | 12-Jul-04/9:23 AM | Reply
hi. i realy like your poem!!!1
[1] god'swife @ 4.232.108.43 | 13-Jul-04/5:11 PM | Reply
I feel tingly all over!
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