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Desperation (Free verse) by gavinduff Obscuring disclosure
murmuring secrets
a soul's thoughts
a breathless rendez-vous
please and cries
indulging whispers
for I am delicious desperation.
Up the ladder:
looking for
Down the ladder:
Sorry
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Posted: July 12, 2004 8:20 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2004 8:20 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7698 Comments:
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?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.122.216
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12-Jul-04/9:23 AM
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hi. i realy like your poem!!!1
I feel tingly all over!
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