poemranker ::20 most recent comments by sliver (361-380) and replies

Comments bysliver, 361–380 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Bound To Me by Katzclear 9 Nov 2003, 10:08 AM
?! By the way, how do you submit 4 when the rest of us mortals are restricted to 3?
on Giving up on Coke by Katzclear 9 Nov 2003, 10:05 AM
Ever tried Jolt? That aughta get er
on I'll Take You In My Arms by ilovecars131 9 Nov 2003, 9:53 AM
Touching. BTW, I love cars too
on an early discovery (reworking) by richa 9 Nov 2003, 9:42 AM
O.K. sounds right to me
Somewhere on that beach there are spoilt peaches. Good job, A nice addition to all our lost father poems. I shall return the ten you gave me.
on The Burial by Mona Lisa 9 Nov 2003, 9:31 AM
I like it, the darkness of it seems to touch my soul somehow.10
on Behind My Blue Eyes (rough draft) by Mona Lisa 9 Nov 2003, 9:29 AM
Is there anyone besides me who can do that? I doubt it.
replying on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT 6 Nov 2003, 7:36 PM
By the way, why do you have to bring up "Voyager", You read Broken Ground", Are you trying to piss me off, I'm not having a good day with that word.
replying on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT 6 Nov 2003, 7:33 PM
You'd be surprized, The buick would go for 3 G, It would take me 30 minutes to get it running, but it would probably need to be re-sealed, time has a way with everything.
replying on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT 6 Nov 2003, 7:23 PM
Did you read broken ground? tell me why I can't get spark, I'm seriously about to bury this damn van.
replying on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT 6 Nov 2003, 7:22 PM
Straight 8, you aught to see my junkyard, all oldies. We have a 64 Buick Riviera All orig. with the 425, they called it the 465 wildcat. A 64 pont. Grand Prix (4 Spd), etc..... A motorhead dream!
on :) by Moniquesuvee 6 Nov 2003, 6:06 PM
So, did you get him?
on My Reason For Love by Miggy 6 Nov 2003, 6:00 PM
Young love is probably more important to the formation of who you will be than anything else. This too, keep writing.
on Sorry by tori 6 Nov 2003, 5:52 PM
Yea, I just lost my dad in May, But I was able to be there with him, and I think we were o.k. I still wish it hadn't been so sudden, there were alot of things left unsaid.
on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT 6 Nov 2003, 5:49 PM
A souped up hemi hearse? Sweet. I know where there's a '48 pontiac silverstreak hearse just begging to be restored{Not to change the subject}
on What Do You Do? by tori 6 Nov 2003, 5:46 PM
I've been in love like that once, when I was 17 or so. I had to let her go. The poem I wrote her is on this site, click my name and read Dear Love, That's my version.
on Thoughts by tori 6 Nov 2003, 5:38 PM
In a way, yes I guess. My thoughts must have syrup on them. they seem to stick with me for a while. Kinda like dreams. They stick eith me 'till they are fulfilled.[I have alot of dreams still with me].
on Gods Musician: Grave Digger by SupremeDreamer 6 Nov 2003, 4:43 PM
Wow, I need to read more of your stuff, This is Excellent.
on unsung love by khuscen 6 Nov 2003, 4:41 PM
I've has women drive me away with that piercing glare. Makes me shiver.
on It was... by Shardik 6 Nov 2003, 4:38 PM
Something is wrong with both you and your friend. French Fries anyone?