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Bound To Me (Free verse) by Katzclear
I watch from my foggy window Sitting silently within my dimly lit home Watch you trapse through winter snow I know your loves an incurable syndrome I watch intently as you approach my door Quite excited in your new-found hope I wish that you would pursue me no more For with me you would be unable to cope I arise from my seat and open the door I smile, appearing to enjoy it as surprise You quickly whisk me across the floor And reveal to me what you are to demise She told me it would bind us forever Is what you told me, so you said I find it quite worth it to endeavor It was a road I feared to tread T'was not myself I had fear for But for the one who stood before me here I had problems I knew I could not ignore But I could not explain, could not make clear Solomnly I agreed to his proposal He opened the vial, I looked away He knew not his life was at my disposal I felt my heart sink to dismay We shared a final drink together Tears streamed from my eyes as I watch him fall I watch as his eyes close forever If only I could have told him about all For when from the vial he did drink T'was true forever he was bound to me It was impossible for him to think For my mind it struggles, never free The pain in my head is harshly retained And unfortunately to strong for him But as he fell the pain was all sustained The problems they all seemed to grow dim I sigh as another one falls I really liked this one To my mind this happening appalls But unfortunately the deed was done.

Up the ladder: you
Down the ladder: Back to Orange and Black

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8596
Posted: November 9, 2003 9:58 AM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2003 9:58 AM PST
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Comments:
[8] sliver @ 63.189.17.119 | 9-Nov-03/10:08 AM | Reply
?! By the way, how do you submit 4 when the rest of us mortals are restricted to 3?
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > sliver | 9-Nov-03/10:13 AM | Reply
....I.... *looks confused* I don't know... I was actually wondering that when I submitted them..... that happened last time too...
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > Katzclear | 9-Nov-03/10:18 AM | Reply
LOL you know u sound just like Bratsy ;)
[8] sliver @ 63.189.17.119 > Katzclear | 9-Nov-03/10:21 AM | Reply
Indiana huh? Riiight.
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > sliver | 9-Nov-03/10:22 AM | Reply
hehehe yup indi
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > Katzclear | 9-Nov-03/10:21 AM | Reply
Yes you do. you do you do you do. I am one of her friends
[8] sliver @ 63.189.17.119 > Katzclear | 9-Nov-03/10:25 AM | Reply
What makes you think I sound like Bratsy, were nothing alike.
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > sliver | 9-Nov-03/10:26 AM | Reply
She just tells me that all the time. that's NOT FAIR!
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > Katzclear | 9-Nov-03/10:28 AM | Reply
no that's what she says to me :)
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > sliver | 9-Nov-03/10:28 AM | Reply
LOL yes she does ^.^
[8] sliver @ 63.189.17.119 > Katzclear | 9-Nov-03/10:30 AM | Reply
Well, nice to meet ya, kindof:)
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > sliver | 9-Nov-03/10:31 AM | Reply
hehe yeah u too
[8] sliver @ 63.190.72.255 > Katzclear | 9-Nov-03/11:20 AM | Reply
Is that you reading all my crap?
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