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The Awesome One (Free verse) by ingwa
My heart, my soul cries out to thee
The caring guardian of all
The life force behind everyone
It surrounds and envelopes
You experience the greatness
When eyes have been opened
Awareness and observation
Causes a skip of the heart
Often ignored, neglected
Not respected every now and then
Taken for granted always
Some lessons truly learned
Do not abuse and forget
The astounding things surround
Giving light to inspiration
Science tries to explain
The mover of mountains
Creator of storms
Destruction easily created
Impossible to harness
Oh Mother Nature
You infect my senses
My heart is deeply moved
For you're The Awesome One indeed.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8644
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2005 1:09 PM PDT
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"Causes a skip of the heart" should be "Cause . . "
"The astounding things surround" should probably be "surrounding"