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The Awesome One (Free verse) by ingwa

My heart, my soul cries out to thee The caring guardian of all The life force behind everyone It surrounds and envelopes You experience the greatness When eyes have been opened Awareness and observation Causes a skip of the heart Often ignored, neglected Not respected every now and then Taken for granted always Some lessons truly learned Do not abuse and forget The astounding things surround Giving light to inspiration Science tries to explain The mover of mountains Creator of storms Destruction easily created Impossible to harness Oh Mother Nature You infect my senses My heart is deeply moved For you're The Awesome One indeed.

Dovina 17-May-05/1:59 PM
Not as good as your first. I counted three grammatical errors.




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