| Re: Steal my heart by baby_d |
9-Nov-03/4:46 PM |
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It does sound kinda pimple. Try to expand your mind when writing about love, it's too easy to sound cliche(At least that's what they say)
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| Re: As I sit alone by baby_d |
9-Nov-03/4:44 PM |
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Spellcheck your stuff once in awhile, that way you at least seem to know what you're doing. What is this about? Your Grandma, a miscarraige,?
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| Re: The way I know it's love by baby_d |
9-Nov-03/4:42 PM |
I had to look to make sure you weren't one of our new 14 year olds, now I can say Oh no I can't.
O.K. Though. You know, I never see any comments from you. Do you expect vote's and such w/o reciprocation?
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| Re: Shattered by Katzclear |
9-Nov-03/11:37 AM |
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The best so far A well deserved 10
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| Re: Foolish by Katzclear |
9-Nov-03/11:36 AM |
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Try not to need too much, it leaves you open to pain.
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| Re: Secrets by Katzclear |
9-Nov-03/11:34 AM |
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O.k. Seems like we got anudder poete around ere
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| Re: Not who You thought I was by Katzclear |
9-Nov-03/11:32 AM |
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A little young for all that raw emotion aren't you? Good read.
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| Re: take me home by New Life Drug |
9-Nov-03/11:26 AM |
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It's just gonna get deeper. Good poem, I enjoyed it.
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| Re: a comment on Bound To Me by Katzclear |
9-Nov-03/11:20 AM |
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Is that you reading all my crap?
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| Re: Why...? by muffielouise |
9-Nov-03/11:16 AM |
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Start saving so yew ken by a knew bord
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| Re: I, The Lord by ilovecars131 |
9-Nov-03/11:06 AM |
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| Re: a comment on A heart without keys by sliver |
9-Nov-03/11:03 AM |
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| Re: Their Memories Shall Live On by ilovecars131 |
9-Nov-03/10:40 AM |
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I think they may be waiting a long time.
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| Re: Gotta Leave You Alone by Katzclear |
9-Nov-03/10:36 AM |
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He sounds evil. uugh. A good thing to let go of? You must be alot older than Bratsy to be feeling all this angst.
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| Re: a comment on Bound To Me by Katzclear |
9-Nov-03/10:30 AM |
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Well, nice to meet ya, kindof:)
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| Re: a comment on Bound To Me by Katzclear |
9-Nov-03/10:25 AM |
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What makes you think I sound like Bratsy, were nothing alike.
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| Re: a comment on On Visiting My Father by sliver |
9-Nov-03/10:23 AM |
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Ya, she writes about him alot too.
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| Re: a comment on Bound To Me by Katzclear |
9-Nov-03/10:21 AM |
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| Re: Free reign by INTRANSIT |
9-Nov-03/10:14 AM |
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Vivid, I can see this hore running free
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| Re: My vow- My bond- My curse by Katzclear |
9-Nov-03/10:11 AM |
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Sucks huh? I especially like the third stanza.
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