on Steal my heart by baby_d
9 Nov 2003, 4:46 PM
It does sound kinda pimple. Try to expand your mind when writing about love, it's too easy to sound cliche(At least that's what they say)
on As I sit alone by baby_d
9 Nov 2003, 4:44 PM
Spellcheck your stuff once in awhile, that way you at least seem to know what you're doing. What is this about? Your Grandma, a miscarraige,?
on The way I know it's love by baby_d
9 Nov 2003, 4:42 PM
I had to look to make sure you weren't one of our new 14 year olds, now I can say Oh no I can't.
O.K. Though. You know, I never see any comments from you. Do you expect vote's and such w/o reciprocation?
O.K. Though. You know, I never see any comments from you. Do you expect vote's and such w/o reciprocation?
on Not who You thought I was by Katzclear
9 Nov 2003, 11:32 AM
A little young for all that raw emotion aren't you? Good read.
on take me home by New Life Drug
9 Nov 2003, 11:26 AM
It's just gonna get deeper. Good poem, I enjoyed it.
replying on Bound To Me by Katzclear
9 Nov 2003, 11:20 AM
Is that you reading all my crap?
on Why...? by muffielouise
9 Nov 2003, 11:16 AM
Start saving so yew ken by a knew bord
on I, The Lord by ilovecars131
9 Nov 2003, 11:06 AM
Good luck w/it
replying on A heart without keys by sliver
9 Nov 2003, 11:03 AM
Any better this way?
on Their Memories Shall Live On by ilovecars131
9 Nov 2003, 10:40 AM
I think they may be waiting a long time.
on Gotta Leave You Alone by Katzclear
9 Nov 2003, 10:36 AM
He sounds evil. uugh. A good thing to let go of? You must be alot older than Bratsy to be feeling all this angst.
replying on Bound To Me by Katzclear
9 Nov 2003, 10:30 AM
Well, nice to meet ya, kindof:)
replying on Bound To Me by Katzclear
9 Nov 2003, 10:25 AM
What makes you think I sound like Bratsy, were nothing alike.
replying on On Visiting My Father by sliver
9 Nov 2003, 10:23 AM
Ya, she writes about him alot too.
replying on Bound To Me by Katzclear
9 Nov 2003, 10:21 AM
Indiana huh? Riiight.
on Free reign by INTRANSIT
9 Nov 2003, 10:14 AM
Vivid, I can see this hore running free
on My vow- My bond- My curse by Katzclear
9 Nov 2003, 10:11 AM
Sucks huh? I especially like the third stanza.