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Secrets (Free verse) by Katzclear
Your old friend whispered the word I couldn't help smilin' when I heard All the things you been sayin bout me; She'd promised you she'd never tell I told her that she might as well... But don't be angry with her, don't you see? All the feelings you've kept inside, Emotions ya felt ya had to hide Are the same ones I live with, the same ones I feel about you; All the loving tears that you cried The foolish lies that tore your pride I would never wanna hurt ya..... I just wanna be with you. Well now all our friends have gone away; But I asked if you would like to stay. We could hang around 'n dance a song or two. Just to see that look in your eyes When you were happy to oblige Makes me melt inside to be around you.. All the feelings you kept inside emotions ya felt ya had to hide Are the same ones I live with, the same ones I feel about you; All the loving tears that you cried The foolish lies that tore your pride; I would never wanna hurt ya..... I just wanna be with you. So please don't run away- Don't hide inside yourself like once before; You just can't deny your feelings are too strong to ignore Don't be scared- Once you come to me I'll never let you down. Just please give me this chance you'll be so glad you let it out Cuz all the feelings you kept inside Emotions ya felt ya had to hide Are the same ones I live with, the same ones I feel about you; All the loving tears that you cried The foolish lies that tore your pride. I would never wanna hurt ya.... I just wanna be with you. No I'm never gonna hurt ya...... I just wanna be with you.

Up the ladder: Exquisite butterflies
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4937
Posted: November 1, 2003 12:59 PM PST; Last modified: November 1, 2003 12:59 PM PST
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[10] deleted user @ 198.81.26.46 | 1-Nov-03/1:05 PM | Reply
I like this one the best... 10/10
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > deleted user | 1-Nov-03/1:10 PM | Reply
Aww really?? You like my love poem?? BRATSY LIKES A LOVE POEM!! tehehehehehe
[10] deleted user @ 198.81.26.143 > Katzclear | 1-Nov-03/1:15 PM | Reply
It is a GOOD poem, i told you i hate writing about love ! we have talked about his before Katclear ! ~*~
[10] deleted user @ 198.81.26.143 > deleted user | 1-Nov-03/1:16 PM | Reply
This * :)
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > deleted user | 1-Nov-03/1:19 PM | Reply
lol yep. I know it.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.105 > Katzclear | 1-Nov-03/5:36 PM | Reply
lol
ditto
[9] sliver @ 63.190.72.255 | 9-Nov-03/11:34 AM | Reply
O.k. Seems like we got anudder poete around ere
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