Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Across The Ocean (Free verse) by lilshorrtee
I look across the ocean I see your face and no emotion I wish I could go across that ocean I wish I could swim across the sea and if I could go over the ocean I would see you once more by me I wonder what your doing what your thinking so I glare more over the ocean and see your face and no emotion I wonder how your going along with the heavens above I wonder if your sailing with the doves Oh I wish I could go across that ocean I wish I could swim across the sea and if I could go over the ocean I would see you once more by me I wonder how your getting along with the angels I wonder if your fullfulling your dreams I wonder if your doing alright I wonder if your sleeping at night or maybe your watching over friends and family I wish I could go across that ocean I wish I could swim across the sea and If I could go over the ocean I would see you once more by me

Up the ladder: Unable To Be Whole
Down the ladder: The Dark Days of Aristotle

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 01
.. 01
.. 00
.. 01
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4885
Posted: July 28, 2004 11:46 AM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2004 12:05 PM PDT
View voting details
140 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001