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Their Memories Shall Live On (Free verse) by ilovecars131
Eight of whome we lost
None of them forgotten
To tell you this
While overhead the sky grows dark
And as the moon climbs
What do you see, vicious animals?
No, the vision of bold warriors
They move in silence, as it seems to me
For their strong arm shall guide the shivering
And on they will go, waiting for the light
Since feeling is first
From the compassion that I have
Lowering my head, I prayed for these men
Nothing gold can stay
But their memories shall live on
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Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5827
Posted: November 9, 2003 10:32 AM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2003 10:32 AM PST
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