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Steal my heart

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Nov 2003 · 5 comments

It was love a first sight. And try as I might, I could'nt find a way to get you off my mind. You've stolen my heart, and given me a new start. I just want you to know that as far as our love grows please treat my heart with care. Be fair, don't break my heart by wanting to be apart. Because I'm in love with You and I feel everything You do. You've stolen my heart so please be smart.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Nov-03/3:09 PM Reply

Congratulations, you've managed to use "love" three times and "heart" four times in three verses. Without a doubt this is the most beautiful and meaningful poem ever written. Oh yeah, and you used "heart/apart".

Do you ever wake up and suddenly think, "Oh no, I'm mindblowingly stupid"?

[7] sliver 9-Nov-03/4:46 PM Reply

It does sound kinda pimple. Try to expand your mind when writing about love, it's too easy to sound cliche(At least that's what they say)

[4] ShaNoN+960317485 10-Nov-03/6:46 AM Reply

Is this luv or begging just dont know, most of all this feels wrong,but bub ill say its worth a 4 & no more:o(

[3] myles 3-Oct-04/4:39 PM Reply

nice theme, could use development in my oppinion.

[5] Heather Dee 6-Sep-05/2:53 AM Reply

Really cute need to work on ending verse