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Steal my heart (Free verse) by baby_d

It was love a first sight. And try as I might, I could'nt find a way to get you off my mind. You've stolen my heart, and given me a new start. I just want you to know that as far as our love grows please treat my heart with care. Be fair, don't break my heart by wanting to be apart. Because I'm in love with You and I feel everything You do. You've stolen my heart so please be smart.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Nov-03/3:09 PM
Congratulations, you've managed to use "love" three times and "heart" four times in three verses. Without a doubt this is the most beautiful and meaningful poem ever written. Oh yeah, and you used "heart/apart".

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